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Reviewer: Maniacal_Coyote Signed Date: 2021.04.19 - 06:12PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.05.09 - 07:55AM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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it's getting more imennse by the chapter.



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2007.03.23 - 04:22PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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This is just outright brilliant! I can't wait to see the repercussions of this chapter!



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.06.08 - 01:59AM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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Oh, this is how it should've happened. Just catch Scabbers unawares and haul him off with no fuss to the Ministry. I hope no one mucks it up. Harry's remark about the green and silver uniforms was cruel. Perfect for taunting a Marauder. As I implied last chapter, it did me good to see Sirius alive again even in such grim circumstances. Harry was very wise in asking about the missing toe on the wrong paw and letting Arthur come to it himself. The scene with Ginny – well, what can I say. It’s good to see her giving him comfort in a fairly intimate way and him accepting it. It has to be an odd struggle to remember that she is not the girl who was murdered, so things will play out differently. Their relationship has to grow, but she’s not lovesick like the first Ginny, and Harry will have to resist any urges to instigate a physical relationship considering how young they both are (well, he sort of is). Excellent chapter. Brilliant!



Reviewer: mystic_damon Anonymous Date: 2005.12.25 - 05:03PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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I think this is great and i just cannot get enough of it. this is such great work. i cannot wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! Next installment has been submitted...



Reviewer: fayerae Anonymous Date: 2005.12.19 - 04:36PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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pretty good. i still am a little uneased ar how everything is working out "perfectly". good job. just a little too planned abd perfecyted. like arthur figurung everything out

Author's Response: Well, Harry has been planning some of these things for a while now, and discreetly steering conversations. It does go awry on occasions (beat to death by the Dursleys anyone?), but Harry's really been getting in touch with his 'inner Slytherin'...



Reviewer: LuckyHP Signed Date: 2005.12.16 - 11:49PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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Whoho! Keep up the very good work! I can't wait for the next chapter! I also liked the plot outline. I'll probably have to wait and see along with the rest of the readers but a couple of questions: 1. How often do you update? 2. Around what book will Harry tell everyone the truth? 3. Will Sirius (after he's freed) live near the Weasley's? 4. Will CoS happen all over again? 5. Most likely Ginny will be sorted into Gryffindor, right? 6. Will the resurrection ceremony be different for Lord Voldemort (how much different)? 7. What happened to the 'orginal' Harry after the Thrity-year old Harry merged with him? 8. Also, just curious, how often does Harry remember that this Ginny won't be the same as the 'other' Ginny? If you take my point....in other words kind of living off old memories or something (if you take my point, like not really believing the fact that the old Ginny is gone....though Harry wouldn't do something like that on purpose *I think*). 9. Will Hermione still recieve Croockshanks? 10. Is 'Professor' Snape going to be fired in your story? If so, how long will it take (will it be before book 6)? 11. How out of sort will GoF be in your story? 12. How close will Harry/Ginny be, like will they be able to 'feel' if the others in danger or something of the sort in your story? ;) Keep up the good work! Everyone seems to be in character, and it was probably hard to describe Ginny's character before book 5 (at the least). I also liked how you do the flashbacks in Harry's nightmares (poor Harry). Also I hadn't thought about the possibility of Lucius Malfoy paying Snape (Professor Snape) to do things to Harrys mind during year one. Keep up the very good work and I can not wait for the next chapter! Have a Happy Holidays, a Merry Christmas, Felice Navidad, Kwanzaha, Hanuaka, and whatever else you celebrate! Also and a Happy New Year! Whoho!

Author's Response: 1) As often as I can. 2) That;s a secret for now. 3) That will depend on his legal status won't it. Nice thing they have the floo network though. 4) Not if Harry can help it! 5) Hopefully Harry hasn't changed things up THAT far. 6) From Canon, there seem to be a lot of different ways to skin that cat. It will depend on what's available to the Dark Tosser's minions. 7) Merged means merged. Their identities have mingled into this one person. His mental age isn't really 30 and it isn't really 11 either. 8) This sneaks up and smacks Harry upside the head from time to time. It's really hard for him at times, but developing their relationship through the letters seems to have helped him a lot. Not to mention how it's jumpstarted her confidence. 9) We'll see, won't we? 10) Do you really want me to answer this? Harry wants him GONE, but others are less than cooperative. 11) The Triwizard Tournament is still scheduled for 1994. 12) There may be magical means of doing that. Happy Holidays to yourself as well!



Reviewer: blaze2005 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.15 - 08:18PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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This fic you have been writing has been absolutely brilliant... Most fanfic writers would cringe at the idea of recreating the whole series, but you have not, creating a enrapturing and thrilling novel... Please keep writing, UPDATE SOON

Author's Response: Thanks! and the next installment has been submitted.



Reviewer: Ender Signed Date: 2005.12.15 - 11:02AM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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You are one ambitious author. You are attempting not just to write the future book(s), but to rewrite the entire series, while remaining true to canon. But I must say, you have made an excellent start. I really loved your story. I have one question about the nature of the soul. We know that the only thing of Voldy that survived trying to kill Harry was his putrid little piece of soul; and it carried all the information that the "Dark Tosser" knew. Hence the soul is the repository of knowledge (rather than the synaptic connections of the brain); at least in Potterverse. But doesn't that automatically mean that transfering the soul accross time is also transferring information? How does that affect the temporal tunnel or whatever?

Author's Response: Yes, I may be a bit of a masochist, but the story won't leave me alone.. =)... Yes, transferring Future-Harry's soul is, in fact, transferring his information and memories to his past self - resulting in Merged-Harry. That's the whole point. Fortunately Souls are immaterial, and one of the few things that won't collapse the temporal transity field.



Reviewer: Ginnykins Anonymous Date: 2005.12.15 - 05:43AM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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You're amazing! You've done it again! This is absolutley brilliant and I love it!!!! I absolutely love it!!!!! It is soooooooooo good! I will definitely recommend this to other fanfic writers! I think you should most definitley consider an apprenticeship for JK! Definitely ten out of ten! I would like to try and submit my fanfic, but I just can't get login to work and I've tried everything! Any suggestions?

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! If you have cookies disabled on your browser, I think that will block you from logging on.



Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.12.15 - 12:06AM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

Chapter 12 is mislabled in the text. It jumps from ch.10 to ch.12. Great story man, keep updating.

Author's Response: That's because I posted 10 and 11 together... folks who read the first half of the Dursley confrontation got very upset because they didn't understand why Harry was holding back so much.



Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.12.14 - 08:52PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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Well, I think it is worth the risk. Even if the people don't see him the same in the end, it could be worth it for him, because he still saves the people he loves most. All because of love. You will do anything for love.



Reviewer: LadyLatina Signed Date: 2005.12.14 - 08:48PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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This is a very interesting story. Can't wait to see where this is going. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Marsella Anonymous Date: 2005.12.14 - 06:29PM Title: A visit to Sunny Azkaban

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I have say it before and I say it now: GREAT STORY I always are checking for new chapter of this story of yours 'cause it is a really good one, I mean it have all kind of emotions and you really want more each time you read the final of a chapter. I love the fact that Harry is going to help Sirius and this Ginny is so cute but the way Harry is playing with the future is... just... well... wonderfully dangerous, I mean is everything Harry wants in someway but well it's just like Harry say to himself "this Ginny is wonderful but is not his Ginny" everything is his but not his and in the final maybe it won't turn out like is supossed to be but it's woth the risk? I think I have to wait to find out!!!! Keep going I hope you update soon can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! Yes, Harry is constantly stumbling over that very issue, It doesn't help that his mind is really a merger of his younger and older self. And the next installment has been submitted.




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