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Reviewer: Byrnzy Signed Date: 2009.03.21 - 10:34AM Title: Fun and Payback

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why is it wood is engaged to 2 ppl??? in chapter 30 you state that katie bell is engaged to 'a handsome young quidditch player (or something to that extent whereas in this chapter george says “I ran into Alicia Spinnet last week, did you know she’s engaged to Oliver Wood?” would simply like you to clear this up cheers -matt

Author's Response: I didnt even realize lol. thanks and wood is engaged to Alicia.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.29 - 02:51PM Title: Fun and Payback

Better he has been scared and im sure won't mess with them but I don't know just seems like it would of been hard to save your anger for a day to do that but im not the author you are and I trust your judgement though I do like how the rest of the weasley clan got involved also.

Author's Response: it is hard but i think when ur more concerned about someone u love u can hold it back!



Reviewer: leinad312 Signed Date: 2008.03.23 - 09:08AM Title: Fun and Payback

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I still don't think that was enough..... Crucio should have been in order

Author's Response: i think he got what he deserved.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2008.01.06 - 03:59PM Title: Fun and Payback

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2006.12.17 - 09:52PM Title: Fun and Payback

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Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2006.10.11 - 07:47PM Title: Fun and Payback

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>:-) almost everyone there hit him. Im glad. But i still want him dead. This was a good start on his punishment, i was almost hoping for an unforgivable from someone, namely the cruciatus curse. He would have really deserved that. Im glad that her whole family rallied around her and went after the bastard, I just still want him dead. Or locked away with the Dementors... starve him and lock him away.. I like that the house elves got in on it, what the did was pretty great and fitting. too bad maddy stopped their last idea... I want more Dudley torture!! Beat him, starve him, cut him, drop him from high places, drown him, take a page from Filtch and hang him by his thumbs! maybe I should write a quick story on the many ways to torture and kill a Dursley... ::wicked grin:: nah, im not a writer..

Author's Response: lmao - wow u reall are angry but that would make an interesting story. sry to say he does not get punished anymore.



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.07.12 - 08:32PM Title: Fun and Payback

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It's good to see Dudley finally get what he deserves and it's good that Petunia and Vernon finally saw that there something wrong with their son.

Author's Response: finally is better the never



Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2006.06.19 - 02:16PM Title: Fun and Payback

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stupid dudley! he got what he deserves! almost!

Author's Response: i kno i kno most ppl wanted me to kill him or something but i thought the punishment was good and not cruel - after all it was mean but pranks at the same time which fits the Weasleys.



Reviewer: Katie27 Signed Date: 2006.05.04 - 09:08AM Title: Fun and Payback

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I will read more when I get home. -Katie

Author's Response: lol okay



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2006.04.26 - 07:30AM Title: Fun and Payback

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WOW all i can say is WOW dudley sure did deserve all that!!! very good chap 13 more to go!!!

Author's Response: yes he most certainly did and thank you!



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.04.23 - 11:36PM Title: Fun and Payback

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I'd say those were pretty acurate reactions from Ginny's family. Man I wish I had brothers like them, all 5 of them. But one question (maybe I forgot something) but where was Charlie in all this? I like Molly and Arthur's reactions, and even Petunia and Vernon once they realized what Dudley had done.

Author's Response: i never noticed that i didnt have charlie in there to tell u the truth - we'll just assume he was in Romania



Reviewer: dramaking341 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.24 - 02:13PM Title: Fun and Payback

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Even though I already read the edited version of the chapter a long time, I still enjoyed it a whole lot better...although I think that nothing can ever be enough punishment for Dudly trying to rape Ginny Yours Now and Forever, Matty

Author's Response: lol well i think dudley was punished enough. - matty?



Reviewer: MRS _POTTER 4EVA Anonymous Date: 2006.02.19 - 07:15AM Title: Fun and Payback

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thats more like it loved the edited version very gd

Author's Response: thanks - im glad u approve - it was edited and fixed almost right awaya bit siye was having some problems



Reviewer: Larry Anonymous Date: 2006.02.16 - 05:10PM Title: Fun and Payback

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OUCH! punishment from the house elves on top of the rest of the family? Loved it. I think Dudders had a real wake up call, and I doubt he will ever do that again or be the neighborhood bully. Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: thanks - but dudders is pretty thick so dont be too sure lol - but we can hope - he definitly got what he deserved it my opinion!!



Reviewer: melly15 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.15 - 08:16PM Title: Fun and Payback

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yAY!fun and payback.....EVEN MORE!I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author 's Response: ayay!



Reviewer: Gerard Anonymous Date: 2006.02.14 - 06:38PM Title: Fun and Payback

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Yayy :D Amazing :D I love the new version :D ;)

Author's Response: yay! im so glad - havent talked to u in a while.



Reviewer: maggie Anonymous Date: 2006.02.13 - 04:24PM Title: Fun and Payback

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I read the dobby maddy and winky part and the part where he tells ginnys brothers, is that all the edited part? if its not please let me noe im always reading the reviews and authors respone lmao i find the prospect of that hillarious, im just imagining 3 house elves going all evil and beating up and torturing some way overweight teen eeeehehehe Love it =[)

Author's Response: lol thanks and no theres more added to the original scene as well with the weasleys and harrys



Reviewer: *~stardust~* Anonymous Date: 2006.02.12 - 10:28PM Title: Fun and Payback

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I've been reading your story for a while now, really do like it. Now I don't want to complain, but I was just looking back at your reviews and noticed something odd, and that was that dramaking341 reviews ALOT for each chapter. Its nice and all but I don't think we are getting a correct rating of your story if alot of your reviews for each chapter are from the same person. I really think this reader should limit the amount of reviews they leave for each chapter. Great story though, keep it up and sorry to be a pain in the ass about it!

Author's Response: lol dont worry - ive asked dramaking on more than one occasion to try to limit his reviews to 5 per chapter - but he doesnt listen too well lol - but i have so manyother great reviews that i like to think my story is good!:D



Reviewer: dramaking341 Signed Date: 2006.02.10 - 08:04PM Title: Fun and Payback

God SIYE pisses me off for not updating this chapter quicker. I do agree with the other reviews that you didn't give Dudley enough torture, but once I read the edited version I felt like he had gotten what he deserved. xoxoxoxoxoxo my angel, Matty

Author's Response: well i dno they r having problems with the site - they approved the chapter lol - but anyone who wants the edited 42 email me



Reviewer: Kate Anonymous Date: 2006.02.06 - 08:06PM Title: Fun and Payback

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Why aren't you writing? I have been waiting forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By the way you are amazing!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks! im aiming to have another chapter up by the weekend.




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