Reviews For Harry Potter and the Prophecy Fulfilled
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.05.04 - 03:54PM Title: Lily and James well i enjoy fluff don't get me wrong but I just thought the other chaps fluff really didn't do much to the story though this I think does add to the story it lets you see Harry's parents and how he reacts to seeing them. Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2006.10.12 - 07:25PM Title: Lily and James Geeze, the 2 of them go at it like bunnies, 2-3 times a day! Good God! ^.~ Lol. Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.07.23 - 12:18AM Title: Lily and James Well I see that Harry inherited alot of his mother's good qualities. It's nice to see this side of Lily. Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2006.06.19 - 04:48PM Title: Lily and James really did james cast some sort of love spell over potter manor? well it doesn't matter it's all quite cute! Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2006.04.26 - 07:27PM Title: Lily and James haaaaaaaa those were cool memories of lupin's i really liked this chapter!!! Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.04.24 - 12:43PM Title: Lily and James I like how you had them show Harry their memories of his parents in the pensieve, that was a very good idea. Reviewer: hpf2114 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.28 - 04:06PM Title: Lily and James Just went back and reread chapter 42. Much better, but the git deserves at least 3 full and long chapter of making him suffer. Will you please make him get it a few more times in the future. make him have a sunflower seed without the shell, if you get my meaning. great writing, keep posting. Your friends story is starting nicely. Reviewer: Balecirithiel Signed Date: 2006.02.28 - 12:27AM Title: Lily and James These last two chapters were very good, I enjoyed them a lot. I like your version of how Petunia came to be so mean, and those memories of young James were great too. Please update soon! Reviewer: mellyyyyyy**** Anonymous Date: 2006.02.27 - 07:19PM Title: Lily and James Excellent!!!!! I felt like if i waz in the pensive too.It waz awesome!!!!!!Well your doing great so keep up the fantastic worK.& i'll keep on checking 4 new updates...BYE Reviewer: Sweetie813 Signed Date: 2006.02.27 - 07:14PM Title: Lily and James Yet another wonderful chapter!
Sorry its so late, i was in Washington DC. for a group JSA. excellent chapter and i can't wait for the rest! Reviewer: Merlani Signed Date: 2006.02.27 - 05:18PM Title: Lily and James excellent as usual Reviewer: dramaking341 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 09:49PM Title: Lily and James GOD MY MUM IS A FREAKING FAG AT TIMES!!! COME ONLINE PLEASE....PLEASE ANGEL
xoxoxo,
Matty Reviewer: abby Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 09:15PM Title: Lily and James brilliant you are wicked and i love your writing update soon Reviewer: emma Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 09:10PM Title: Lily and James great chapters I LOVED seeing james and lily keep writing Reviewer: kate Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 07:24PM Title: Lily and James Love the ending! Great job, as always! Can't wait for the next installment! Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 03:19PM Title: Lily and James omg, tht was ace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol, bloody brill, but i still think tht petunia shud beg 4 4givness lol Reviewer: Nemorensis Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 01:10PM Title: Lily and James wow two chapters at once!
i enjoyed reading about lilly and james' past i think is good that harry knows alittle more about his parents.
looking trough again i found some more words that british people wouldn't use:
1) sweat pants - should be tracksuit bottoms (chapters 47)
2) couch - should be sofa (seté is also acceptible but isn't used as much and might make him sound too posh.) (chapers 47 and 48)
3)vacation - defidently should be holiday (chapters 48)
i hope i'm being useful again and not just annoying Reviewer: dramaking341 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 12:43PM Title: Lily and James Sweet...although I don't get why you can't be on now
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