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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.05.04 - 03:54PM Title: Lily and James

well i enjoy fluff don't get me wrong but I just thought the other chaps fluff really didn't do much to the story though this I think does add to the story it lets you see Harry's parents and how he reacts to seeing them.

Author's Response: thank you.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2008.01.06 - 09:33PM Title: Lily and James

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2006.12.23 - 12:04PM Title: Lily and James

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Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2006.10.12 - 07:25PM Title: Lily and James

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Geeze, the 2 of them go at it like bunnies, 2-3 times a day! Good God! ^.~ Lol.
Well it was nice to see what she had to show, and it explained a bit. Odd tho that both Lily and Ginny get assaulted by a male Dursley.. I liked Remus's memories better tho :-) gotta love James.

Author's Response: lol yes u do - and u know what i never thought about that but i guess they do - tho lily not badly as vernon was drunk. lol,



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.07.23 - 12:18AM Title: Lily and James

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Well I see that Harry inherited alot of his mother's good qualities. It's nice to see this side of Lily.

Author's Response: thanks! thats what i was going for!!



Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2006.06.19 - 04:48PM Title: Lily and James

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really did james cast some sort of love spell over potter manor? well it doesn't matter it's all quite cute!

Author's Response: lol thanks and no james didnt cast a love spell over potter manor. it just happens to be filled with lovers.



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2006.04.26 - 07:27PM Title: Lily and James

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haaaaaaaa those were cool memories of lupin's i really liked this chapter!!!

Author's Response: thank you! i thought harry really needed a chance to see his memories!



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.04.24 - 12:43PM Title: Lily and James

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I like how you had them show Harry their memories of his parents in the pensieve, that was a very good idea.

Author's Response: thank you! i thought he really needed this!



Reviewer: hpf2114 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.28 - 04:06PM Title: Lily and James

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Just went back and reread chapter 42. Much better, but the git deserves at least 3 full and long chapter of making him suffer. Will you please make him get it a few more times in the future. make him have a sunflower seed without the shell, if you get my meaning. great writing, keep posting. Your friends story is starting nicely.

Author's Response: lol i'll think about it - but im pretty sure he's suffered enough lol



Reviewer: Balecirithiel Signed Date: 2006.02.28 - 12:27AM Title: Lily and James

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These last two chapters were very good, I enjoyed them a lot. I like your version of how Petunia came to be so mean, and those memories of young James were great too. Please update soon!

Author's Response: thank you - and i will try to update soon!



Reviewer: mellyyyyyy**** Anonymous Date: 2006.02.27 - 07:19PM Title: Lily and James

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Excellent!!!!! I felt like if i waz in the pensive too.It waz awesome!!!!!!Well your doing great so keep up the fantastic worK.& i'll keep on checking 4 new updates...BYE

Author's Response: lol thanks and good that means im writing properly.



Reviewer: Sweetie813 Signed Date: 2006.02.27 - 07:14PM Title: Lily and James

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Yet another wonderful chapter! Sorry its so late, i was in Washington DC. for a group JSA. excellent chapter and i can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: thanks and np - read whenever u get a chance - glad u enjoyed it and i hope u enjoyed ur trip:D



Reviewer: Merlani Signed Date: 2006.02.27 - 05:18PM Title: Lily and James

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excellent as usual

Author's Response: why thank you Merlani!



Reviewer: dramaking341 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 09:49PM Title: Lily and James

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GOD MY MUM IS A FREAKING FAG AT TIMES!!! COME ONLINE PLEASE....PLEASE ANGEL xoxoxo, Matty

Author 's Response: calm urself matt



Reviewer: abby Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 09:15PM Title: Lily and James

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brilliant you are wicked and i love your writing update soon

Author's Response: thank you.



Reviewer: emma Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 09:10PM Title: Lily and James

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great chapters I LOVED seeing james and lily keep writing

Author's Response: thanks and i plan too



Reviewer: kate Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 07:24PM Title: Lily and James

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Love the ending! Great job, as always! Can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: thank you.



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 03:19PM Title: Lily and James

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omg, tht was ace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol, bloody brill, but i still think tht petunia shud beg 4 4givness lol

Author's Response: lol she should - maybe i will consider it lol - or u could put it in urs with snape being an usher - haha that still cracks me uP!



Reviewer: Nemorensis Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 01:10PM Title: Lily and James

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wow two chapters at once! i enjoyed reading about lilly and james' past i think is good that harry knows alittle more about his parents. looking trough again i found some more words that british people wouldn't use: 1) sweat pants - should be tracksuit bottoms (chapters 47) 2) couch - should be sofa (seté is also acceptible but isn't used as much and might make him sound too posh.) (chapers 47 and 48) 3)vacation - defidently should be holiday (chapters 48) i hope i'm being useful again and not just annoying

Author's Response: oh thanks - no i really dont mind thanks!



Reviewer: dramaking341 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 12:43PM Title: Lily and James

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Sweet...although I don't get why you can't be on now Love Ya, Matty

Author's Response: cuz i didnt want to be lol




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